kokocipher's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Heroes March (Extended) ~P~]

I think the stick hit really did its magic to separate itself from the rest.

[Following Your Star (Demo) ~P~]

Nothing to complaint: it's charming, and the chorus is memorable.

The only thing I'd suggest doing is to keep the bass more stable during the chorus so that it doesn't steal too much spotlight from the violin lead.

[ALitDoD (Preview) ~P~]

violin is a bit too loud in the beginning.
Suggestion: violin: -volume, pitch one octave up, +reverb, restrict equalizer range to make it sound thinner

Organ: +chorus, pitch one octave down
Techno loopy sweep: -volume
Drumkit: add closedhat after hook

[Those Who Fight (Demo) ~P~]

I don't know if it's your compressor or the mp3 convertor normalizer, it all sounded a bit compressed. Maybe you can change the techno kit to a rock kit so the snare drum is more noticeable. Right now the snare is too low pitched, and you already have a thick heavy kick.

[Faerie Breeze ~P~(Teaser)]

Percussion is too "loud," repetitive, and it's stealing the spot light and contradicting from the very laid back melody. The melody is simple and memorable, could use a chorus segment to reenforce it.

Phyrnna responds:

Thanks for the critique! :D

[Battlements ~P~ (Teaser)]

After the hook, I think the percussion rhythm and kit should change, especially since you've used the reverse cymbal as a transition.

[Fallen Blood ~P~ (Teaser)]

I really like the Gothic/Metal/Techno/ style of the EBF series.
Gothic: Medieval(Nat.), Rock: Berserk(Matt), Techno(Lance)